Diaz, Dana J. My Narrative Story College Choosing a College or University can be difficult. The most difficult part is finding a University that prepares you well for your future career. Another difficult in choosing a University or College is afford ability. You need to be able to pay the tuition fees and living expenses.
Some institutions might be able to offer you scholarships if you cannot afford the fees. A good location is also very important when choosing school. The environment should be safe and quiet to facilitate studying.
All secondary high school students think about their future going to College or University. To get in University, you must get high grades and done all the course that are needed from high school.
When I was in Philippines, I had experience there how to go to University because I studied there for almost 3 months but I didn't finish the first semester because I have to go her in Canada. If I finish my high school, I will continue to study in adult school to continue some of the courses that are needed to accomplish, to be able to get in University or College. At the same time I will find a job to support my parents to pay for some of my tuition fees. So I conclude that being in College someday is very important to me to learn new areas and accomplish it to have a good future.
Good effort. However, in the college essay you were supposed to describe the qualities and talents you have in order to be selected by a University so this essay was a bit off-topic. Paragraph organization was good and your grammar was consistently good. Mr. C.
My Narrative Story
College
Choosing a College or University can be difficult. The most difficult part is finding a University that prepares you well for your future career. Another difficult in choosing a University or College is afford ability. You need to be able to pay the tuition fees and living expenses.
Some institutions might be able to offer you scholarships if you cannot afford the fees. A good location is also very important when choosing school. The environment should be safe and quiet to facilitate studying.
All secondary high school students think about their future going to College or University. To get in University, you must get high grades and done all the course that are needed from high school.
When I was in Philippines, I had experience there how to go to University because I studied there for almost 3 months but I didn't finish the first semester because I have to go her in Canada. If I finish my high school, I will continue to study in adult school to continue some of the courses that are needed to accomplish, to be able to get in University or College. At the same time I will find a job to support my parents to pay for some of my tuition fees. So I conclude that being in College someday is very important to me to learn new areas and accomplish it to have a good future.
Good effort. However, in the college essay you were supposed to describe the qualities and talents you have in order to be selected by a University so this essay was a bit off-topic. Paragraph organization was good and your grammar was consistently good. Mr. C.
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