Past life EventThe best day that happened to me is when I was in the Philippines. We were in my grandfather and grandmother's house and we we're celebrating new years day in year 1999 with all of our family members so that was the day that I will never forget.That was memorable to me because it was the only that we celebrated the new year day with no missing family members. It was very enjoyable,the day that will never forget,and the day that will never repeat because some of my relatives are in the other country and my grandfather and grandmother are already passed away. So I just miss that day and I miss them all. I felt like I'm looking for someone every time that another year is coming. Now everything is fine,life goes on ,and past is past so I will continue what I have started or what I have done .Because I know that all of us are going to disappear on this earth when the right time comes. Most of the grammar is pretty good in this paragraph. You also included most of what was asked for in the outline. Please separate your essay into the paragraphs asked for in the outline. Be careful of spaces between commas and periods. Mr. C.
Most of the grammar is pretty good in this paragraph. You also included most of what was asked for in the outline. Please separate your essay into the paragraphs asked for in the outline. Be careful of spaces between commas and periods. Mr. C.
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