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All in all, being comedian or joker are fun if you make people happy but sometimes jokes should be limited if the reason is, you hurt people by making fun of them like about their gender, apperance , and religion. I conclude that we should think of what will be the feelings of the person if ever we make jokes for them.
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Gender

Third is about our religion. Everyone has different perspective in life and different belief in god. Some of us believe in god and some don't, in this world, we are not forced to have a religion if we don't want too. Because of many religions, some people who doesn't have religion are laughing and bullying religious people because they believe in god. For example, in my country there is a religion called Iglesia ni Cristo. People who are their religion is Iglesia ni Cristo are not allow to eat animals blood. In Philippines, if we killed pig, we get the blood of the pig to cook as our food but them, they are not allow to eat blood, that's why other religion laugh and bullying them because of their different perspective in religion. In my opinion, we people doesn't need to laugh or to bully other people just because of their perspective in god. Despite we believe in different gods, the important is being a good person to everyone because even though you don't believe in god, but you know of what is right and wrong not to do.
All in all, being comedian or joker are fun if you make people happy but sometimes jokes should be limited if the reason is, you hurt people by making fun of them like about their gender, apperance , and religion. I conclude that we should think of what will be the feelings of the person if ever we make jokes for them.
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First of all, economic environment of ''Bilingual Education''
is one reason of why many people like students are not yet ready to learn another language aside from their own native languages. One of the big reason are dealing with the cost of the programs. Students who want to learn English language can't enroll to the ''Bilingual Education'' because they are problematic with the fess of the school for ''Bilingual Education.'' That's one of the major problem that students who are lack of money may not learn English as their second language. The fact that students who want to learn English, allows them to explore a career in translation and interpretation. People who can communicate in two languages give the person many opportunities in life. ''People who oppose Bilingual Education say that millions of dollars were wasted by focusing on Bilingual Education. The major disadvantages of Bilingual Education, is that minority speakers, although wish to learn English, don't wish to enter into mainstream society and so they stick to their native languages.'' So some of the students just buy dictionaries or they are just using internet instead to go to Bilingual Education.
there is a continuous flow of immigrants coming around the world, both legally and illegally, who do not speak English, the issue of Bilingual Education is not going to go away anytime soon. In fact, it is quickly becoming an issue that many countries must address.'' So, Bilingual Education is very needed for immigrants or exchange students just to learn English language that will help them to communicate with other nationalities that knows of how to speak English. The argument for cultural environment of Bilingual Education is everyone should be taught in their own languages and non - English speakers shout not be discriminated. The advantages of learning a new culture is you can mingle to other nationalities if you are in their country. The disadvantages of learning a new culture, is you might forget some of your culture perspectives or superstitious belief taught by your ancestors. For example, my was born in Philippines and stayed there for 5 years. Now she is in America, she knows of how to speak English fluently despite that English is her second language. Now she knows more about of American culture than her native land.
The third argument of ''Bilingual Education'' is about educational environment. Education is the most important thing in our lives. Studying two languages at the same time is hard for students, so they need to manage their time because there's a lot to do, like build up their speaking and their vocabulary. ''According to the search of Bilingual Education the children who are bilingual often are more creative and think out-of-the-box because of the freedom of expression they experience due to knowing two languages.Other benefits of being bilingual include being able to access more resources and exposure to customs and traditions.'' The disadvantages of bilingual education that pops up mostly is the Bilingual Education is very expensive form of education so it's obvious that some students stick in their language.
I conclude that if culture, economic, and educational environment are not obstacle for students to learn English, they might now know English language, because of that environment in Bilingual Education many students can't go to Bilingual Education and one more reason is the fees of Bilingual Education is very expensive especially for International Students.

Bilingual Education
We all know that the word ''Bilingual Education''Educations are involves teaching academic languages, in a native and Some people wantwants to learn their native languagelanguages and some against ''Bilingual Education''.Education.'' There are people like students who want language but most of themthey are still thinking of it {PR??}confused because of economic environment, ^ cultural environment, and ^ educational environment of bilingual education.Bilingual Education.
First of all, ^ economic environment [of ??] isof ''Bilingual Education''
is one reason many people like students are not aside from their own language.native languages. One of the big reasons isreason are dealing with the programs. PeopleStudents who want to the bilingual education''Bilingual Education'' because they with the feesfess of the school.school for ''Bilingual Education.'' That's one problem that peoplestudents who are and interpretation. Having peoplePeople who can two languages givesgive the person in life. According to the search of ''Bilingual Education'' the children who are bilingual often are more creative and think out-of-the-box because of the freedom of expression they experience due to knowing two languages. Other benefits of being bilingual include being able to access more resources and exposure to customs and traditions. The disadvantages of bilingual education thats pops up mostly is that bilingual education is a very expensive form of education [ALL of these sentences are OFF TOPIC because they are NOT about the economic environment of education; they should be in the third paragraph]. People''People who oppose bilingual educationBilingual Education say that of dollars arewere wasted by focusing on bilingual education.Bilingual Education. The major disadvantages of bilingual education,Bilingual Education, is that enter into the mainstream society their native language. [good; that sentence was your refutation; where islanguages.'' So some of the reply that supports your argument?]students just buy dictionaries or they are just using internet instead to go to Bilingual Education.
The second learn about the culture of the language. Because''Because there is a continuous flow of immigrants coming around the world, both legally and illegally, who do not speak English, the issue of bilingual education is not going to go away anytime soon. In fact, it is quickly becoming an issue that many countries must address. [facts and statistics? Are these your OWN original thoughts or someone else's. If someone else's you NEED a reference] The argument for cultural environment of bilingual education is everyone should be taught in their own language and non - English speakers should not be discriminated. The advantages of learning a new culture is you can mingle to other nationalities if you are in their country and the disadvantages that people said is you can forget your own culture by learning another culture. [where are the facts and stats to support this argument from the readings that were on the wiki? WHere are the refutation and reply sentences for this paragraph ]
The third argument of ''Bilingual Education'' is about educational environment. We all know that education is the most important in our lives. Studying two languages at the same time is hard for students, so they need to manage their time because there's a lot to do, like to build up their speaking and their vocabulary. [RO] People {which people?} said that, students don't need to learn English language if they're not going to other country like Canada because they can understand each other in their own native language. The
good thing of being bilingual is you can talk to other nationalities, be the one of their friends, and you can go anywhere in the world without a translator because you know English language by communicating to others.
[how are you defining bilingual education here? It looks like you are talking about regular ESL learning rather than bilingual education]
''Bilingual Education is one of the topic of why many people argue until now it's because about economic, cultural, and educational environment {???}. Being a bilingual person is depends on you if want to learn or ignore it {??]. ''Bilingual Educational is not forcing you to learn but they're just their if you want too [??]. Even some bilingual programs are expensive to go to in order to learn another language but it's a good program to explore your ideas and you can learn many things [as compared to what other kind of education??]. I conclude that being a bilingual person can help me to communicate to other people and if ever I will go back to my own country I'm sure that what ever I will apply, they will hire me because I studied in a foreign country like Canada. [this last idea was not in your body or thesis and therefore cannot be described here]
In order to discuss bilingual education you need to clearly define what it is and what kind of ESL education you are comparing it to. Then in your body paragraphs you need to make a clear argument why one form of education is better than the other. In this essay I don't know what the other form of education is that you are arguing against. Make sure you look at the rubric and follow the format for the conclusion more closely. Stay on topic in your body paragraphs.
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Life is the very beautiful gift given to us from god. In this world, we have various mission to do as being human like some of us wants to dance, sing, drama, and we need also humour. Lot's of humorous TV shows have been created for us,as our past time or to enjoy our time for a while. We laugh and forget our problems because of humorous TV shows performed by people. But unfortunately, some of humour are not that funny for chasing them about their gender, appearance, and religion.
First of all, I think gender ids the main problem, if you are gay or lesbian because they used to laugh at you, chase, and they don't care about your dignity. In our country, most of the comedians are gays, performing in different bars just to make people happy. Performing like dancing, singing, joking and giving advices that will impact the audiences. For example, Vice Ganda, comedian in Philippines, he is a gay comedian, performed in many various clubs before. Because he is gay, people were laughing at him and called him horse. Horse is the main name given to gays in Philippines. Vice Ganda is very, funny talented, and smart gay that's why he was given a chanced to enter showbiz asa celebrity comedian. He became very famous, lot's of friends in facebook, and people love him in a way of his being funny, talented, joker, and giving good advices. In my opinion, we shouldn't chase people whose are part of third sex because they are not being rude to us. We can do anything we want as a human, only god can prevent us for doing something wrong.
true appearance isare our personality
Third is about our religion. Everyone has different perspective in life and different belief in god. Some of us believe in god and some don't, in this world, we are not forced to have a religion if we don't want too. Because of many religions, some people who doesn't have religion are laughing and bullying religious people because they believe in god. For example, in my country there is a religion called Iglesia ni Cristo. People who are their religion is Iglesia ni Cristo are not allow to eat animals blood. In Philippines, if we killed pig, we get the blood of the pig to cook as our food but them, they are not allow to eat blood, that's why other religion laugh and bullying them because of their different perspective in religion. In my opinion, we people doesn't need to laugh or to bully other people just because of their perspective in god. Despite we believe in different gods, the important is being a good person to everyone because even though you don't believe in god, but you know of what is right and wrong not to do.
All in all, being comedian or joker are fun if you make people happy but sometimes jokes should be limited if the reason is, you hurt people by making fun of them like about their gender, apperance , and religion. I conclude that we should think of what will be the feelings of the person if ever we make jokes for them.

Canadian Satire
Life is the very beautiful gift given to us from god. In this world, we have various mission to do as being human like some of us wants to dance, sing, drama, and we need also humour. Lot's of humorous TV shows have been created for us,as our past time or to enjoy our time for a while. We laugh and forget our problems because of humorous TV shows performed by people. But unfortunately, some of humour are not that funny for chasing them about their gender, appearance, and religion.
Vice Ganda
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Secondly, is about their appearance or look. Many people don't care about you or they're not polite to you if you have a funny look or ugly face. They used to do it because some of them have perspective, if you have that face they think you are lier, stealer or can't trust. For example, in my country, along time ago when we were in grade 4, this guy named Adrian was being accused for stealing money of my classmate because he has funny face and always alone in classroom during our lunch break. But they found out that he didn't steal the money of my classmate because my girl classmate just misplaced her money. For this situation, I can say that do not judge people by it's appearance because our true appearance is our personality or of what we are.
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All in all, being comedian or joker are fun if you make people happy but sometimes jokes should be limited if the reason is, you hurt people by making fun of them like about their gender, apperance , and religion. I conclude that we should think of what will be the feelings of the person if ever we make jokes for them.

Bilingual Education
of it {PR??} because of economic environment, ^ cultural environment, and ^ educational environment of all, ^ economic environment [of ??] is one form of education.education [ALL of these sentences are OFF TOPIC because they are NOT about the economic environment of education; they should be in the third paragraph]. People who native language. [good; that sentence was your refutation; where is the reply that supports your argument?]
The second must address. [facts and statistics? Are these your OWN original thoughts or someone else's. If someone else's you NEED a reference] The argument another culture. [where are the facts and stats to support this argument from the readings that were on the wiki? WHere are the refutation and reply sentences for this paragraph ]
The third their vocabulary. [RO] People {which people?} said that,
good thing of being bilingual is you can talk to other nationalities, be the one of their friends, and you can go anywhere in the world without a translator because you know English language by communicating to others.
''Bilingual[how are you defining bilingual education here? It looks like you are talking about regular ESL learning rather than bilingual education]
''Bilingual Education is and educational environment.environment {???}. Being a or ignore it.it {??]. ''Bilingual Educational you want too.too [??]. Even some learn many things.things [as compared to what other kind of education??]. I conclude like Canada. [this last idea was not in your body or thesis and therefore cannot be described here]
In order to discuss bilingual education you need to clearly define what it is and what kind of ESL education you are comparing it to. Then in your body paragraphs you need to make a clear argument why one form of education is better than the other. In this essay I don't know what the other form of education is that you are arguing against. Make sure you look at the rubric and follow the format for the conclusion more closely. Stay on topic in your body paragraphs.
{Dana.doc} Grammar corrected by Ms. Desmarais